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Sorry, but there is still the mistake in Test India V's overview:

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Die Mehrzahl der sehr ungebildeten und vernünftigen Bewohner ist sehr zufrieden mit den Verhältnissen. Sie genießen den Ruf, fleißig und freiheitsliebend zu sein, und erfreuen sich entspannten.


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Recent reform-acclamation
Reform Administration Reform
Theme Experts say that due to increasing labor costs and a growing population, it is necessary to reorganize the antiquated system of bureaucracy in [staat].
Description of the reform “To get anything done in [staat], ...


Seems to me that "[staat]" should be something else...although for a alliance reform it does not really make sence. Maybe comfreak should have a look at this...




Task "Freedom of Art" (#145)

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"What you see today! Even splotches of ink, pictures painted by chimpanzees, or oversized sexual organs are declared art!" outrages Sigrid Sorrel, chairwoman of the Association for Purity. "The insanity of oscene daubers shouldn't be presented in public, especially not in museums or in school instruction. The Ministry of Culture has to install a regulating group that watches public space. This way, our beautiful country will become a real nation of purity and civilization again!"


Should be obscene.

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License of parenthood task

Red is what I believe to be incorrect, blue is suggestion, and green should be deleted.
Leading psychologists and educationalists argue for the systhematical systematical education of future parents.
"You need licenses for driving and fishing, but not for the most important thing of the world, education." parenting or parenthood thinks Alfred Werething, a settled Psychoanalist. "It is necessary for parents to know how to deal with their children in order to prevent the consequential damages of wrong education. Therefore, we have to introduce a tuition course for education even at school who qualifies for having children. "Therefore we need to mandate that all potential parents take a course in child rearing at their local school." If somebody fails this course, we have to prevent him or her from becoming parent becoming a parent, even by means of chemical sterilization if necessary."
"It's not a good idea to hurt human rights for the assumed interests of children!" angers Oscar Turner, leader of an ecclesiastic residential school vehemently states.
"It is correct that there is no agreement about an ideal way method of education child rearing." says Wilma Bedrock, a bedraggled educationalist. "But we have some ideas about what not to do. To educate the people about them cannot be bad. Therefore, becoming potential parents should take a course and a test and the child allowance they receive should depend on their achievements in the tests. This way, no one can say later on that he didn't know it better."
"I can agree to that. But the children will have even greater disadvantages if the incapable parents get their child allowance cut." says John Shaffrath, former charge of a psychiatry, whose parents were poor and used harsh methods of education discipline?. "Therefore, it would make more sense to observe the families of parents with inadequate test results by means of random visits of licensed educationalists."

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Post: #14
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Thank you Applaus Would you like to improve the translation directly in the system, like Donovius does? You'd become VIP-member for that Jaja


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Thank you. Would you like to improve the translation directly in the system, like Donovius does? You'd become VIP-member for that.


Sure! That would be great! I probably will not go looking for mistakes, but any that I come across I'd be happy to correct.

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Task "Day without TV" (#70)

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"...This would afford a certain bureaucratical efford, but it would most probably top the aimed effect."


The word we are looking for is effort

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Task "Genetically Modified Food" (#96)

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"Too much bueraucracy. And how shall we control imports?" asks Hannah Nitos, a right-wing economist....


"bureaucracy" would be the correct spelling

28.07.2008 08:05
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Task "Public Transit" (#197)

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"...Therefore, we should double the charges for public transit should be doubled and the saved subventions..."


Well...either

"Therefore, we should double the charges for public transit and the saved subventions"

or

"Therefore, the charges for public transit should be doubled and the saved subventions"

is OK...but both is really to much...

30.07.2008 06:17
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Task "Electricity Tariff " (#36)

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...Only a government monopoly can prevent our basic care being dependent on the arbitrariness of money-hungery capatilistic company directors!


capitalistic would be the correct word...


Task "Political contributions" (#248)

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If there are no limits for contributions, the citizens will be unable to comprehend which interests are represented by the parties he votes for...


Well...I think it should better if we stick to the same amount of persons in this sentence Wink (citizens->he). Therefore it would be better:

the citizens will be unable to comprehend which interests are represented by the parties they vote for

01.08.2008 06:27
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Corrected, thx Smile


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